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Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:04:41 PM Title: Part 5C

"Jake Green's guerilla medical testing service." --> OMG - Hahahaha, that's just hilarious! And ick! *Eeeewwwww*

I like the conversation Jake and Johnston had in the den!

Nice first dinner Heather had at the Green's! :)

I will be back for more chapters, but it may take its time because we are moving end of January and it is so much to do... but every now and then I will nip on and treat myself with a chapter, so stay tuned for my reviews! :)

 

 

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:03:45 PM Title: Part 5B

huh, its almost a week since I read this one via my mobile phone... that was eye-straining! *laughs*

Had no time to review, then... and all I just can say after a week is that I loved their date at the water tower and how they couldn't let go of each other... *smirks*

I think I leave it here and will finally treat myself with reading another chapter after all those busy days... ;)

 

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:00:50 AM Title: Part 5A

I like how you "bend" the original story to fit to your ideas!

Observing Heather's school lesson was nice, it totally fits into how I imagined her!

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