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Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 10:51:32 AM Title: Part 6D

Awwww -how cute! I loved the little love letter of Jason... *laughs*

Oh Jeez - cuteness overload - the picnic was sooooo nice... and now I know what you meant with your "warning".... count me in to the ones who wanted to change place with Heather!

Loved it!

:)

"April, as far as he could tell, was keeping the clinic running - barely - with spit and chewing gum, and quite possibly a secret deal with the devil.  Anything could go wrong. " --> Wow, I love your wording here! :)

 

 

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Date: 25 Jun 2013 4:59:01 PM Title: Part 6C

Yes, of course the rumour mill of Jericho is firing now! *laughs*

Oohhh, and Emily found out about the pregnancy, seemed to be really shocked!

;)

Mimi is sooooooooo right: Jake married Heather, didn't he? ;)

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Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:34:55 AM Title: Part 6B

That really was a close call with Mitch! And I like how you got into the deep and padded it out with all the threats Mitch spat out!

Don't dare touch Heather! *scowls*

And poor Heather really had a bad day... hopefully talking to Jake can smooth it out! :)

 

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 7:37:33 PM Title: Part 6A

I'm back! Finally I found some time, and now I will try to catch up and - of course - leave reviews... ;)

Nice how you put the convo between Jake and Mitch into your story! Loved that little encounter... ;)

Ohhh - red roses from Jake! Very romantic! And don't let Em get you, Heather! She's just jealous...

Ahhh - bleeep... nevertheless Em found a way to poison everything... :(

Nice how you worked Heather in at the barn! Very thrilling the moment Jake tried to get her on the radio!

And I loved the sweet moment between Heather and Johnston, when he needed help but would have been to proud to take it - and Heather turned the tables and stated, that she was the one needing help!

Good chapter, I hope soon I can read more!

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