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Reviewer: JuliaGulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2008 2:49:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a great way to tell the story of New Bern. I love that Jake and Heather have kids, i think Heather would be an awsome mom. I also love that you showed a conection between Eric and Heather's daughter (If you put in a name, i missed it, i even went back to look but couldn't find it.) I loved the part where Eric remembers rocking her when she was a baby, that's just so sweet.

 Well keep up the good work, off to read more!


Author's Response:

Thank you, Julia!

I thought the gap in the New Bern story that was left to us was really interesting, and I wanted to try telling it in a different way.

Eric's niece does have a name (though you are right, it was not mentioned in this one- I didn't want to detract too much from Eric's memories here), but it is mentioned in the companion piece I wrote, Starless Sky Story.

Thanks for reading and commenting! 

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