You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 7:23:10 AM Title: Part 9D

I love that you gave April a background!

I really like her... I think I mentioned it before, it was always difficulty for me - because I like Mary, too!!!!

Jeez... but nevertheless I could have smacked Eric hard - very hard - when he left April!

And I like that April was able to talk Jake around...

Phew...

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 6:10:00 AM Title: Part 9C

ohoh... looks like Jake really hurt Heather with his actions... no wonder with all what had happened... the bombs, Johnston's illness, the future is a leap into the dark, her own pregnancy - what a future will the child have? - and especially now with witnessing the marriage of Eric and April break into pieces and April having - understandably - a breakdown...

Then - knowing - that Jake is someone who puts himself in the first line of danger and then learning about what had happened on the bridge...

All that must wear Heather down... :(

And Jake for sure is in deep, deep trouble right now... I don't want to be in his shoes right now!

But hopefully Jake can fix it somehow... *bites fingernails*

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 7:11:12 AM Title: Part 9B

Awwww - those Halloween Flashbacks were great!

And in the future everything is coming to a head... can't wait to read more! *jumps up and down in my chair*

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 7:28:10 AM Title: Part 9A

Wow, nice long first part of that chapter!

I loved all your backflashes, they were brilliant! :)

Can't wait to find the time to read more!

You must login (register) to review.