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Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:03:58 AM Title: Part 4D

Ohhh - Heather really says what's on her mind, doesn't she? That was almost too much for Jake... *snickers*

 

Another nice chapter, looking forward to more! :)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 5:23:47 AM Title: Part 4C

Ohhh - really "hell" of a first date... so Jake's working for / with the FBI... nice one!

I'm glad that Heather could comfort him a bit... nice background story for Jake! :)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:13:07 AM Title: Part 4B

""I wanted - I want a child with you, Jake," she told him.  "Not by myself, with only my memory of you.  With you," Heather repeated.  "Please, remember that," she requested." 

...have goosebumps now... if this does not get to Jake, nothing will...

Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Goosebumps!  You really know how rev up a fanfic writer. :-)  I live for giving people goosebumps.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:49:08 AM Title: Part 4A

Hah - you even had the shower scene in, despite of Heather already being Jake's wife! Love that! :)

 

And their first date and kiss(es) was brilliant! :)



Author's Response:

Well, I couldn't leave out the shower scene, now could I??

Glad you enjoyed my version of their first date and kiss! :-)

Reviewer: merryann Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:21:40 AM Title: Part 4C

Ahhh, now I remember that Jake was undercover with Jonah.  Makes a lot more sense!

Reviewer: merryann Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:17:14 AM Title: Part 4A

"You're gonna call me that for the next seven months, aren't you?" Heather asked, groaning.

"You better believe it," Stanley grinned.

LOL!!

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